Monday, September 24, 2012

Thick Descriptions #1 - Dialogue Journals


My small group reading block began the same as every Monday – students responding to my writing in their dialogue journals. I sat with Karen, Jessica, Michelle, Anthony and Kevin at the kidney table in the back of the classroom. Each student came to the table prepared with a pencil and ready to work in their journals. I set the timer for fifteen minutes and watched as they anxiously and excitedly read my response to their previous writing. By now, dialogue journal writing has become routine for students and they understand expectations. There was no initial conversation, and no questions asked. After reading what I had written, Jessica, Michelle, and Karen did not miss a beat; they immediately went to writing their response back. Anthony sat for three minutes, with pencil in hand, staring from his notebook to the ceiling. I interpreted this behavior to mean he did not know how he wanted to begin his response back to me. Kevin showed little interest to what I had written in his journal, and sat for the first four minutes tapping his pencil to his cheek, saying, “Hmmmm….” In the first eight minutes, the three girls were on they way to writing half page responses, while Anthony had filled two lines on his notebook page. This did not totally surprise me, since he works hard, but very slow, although he is a very bright student, and came make great contributions to class discussions. At this time, Michelle looked at me and said, “I’m done.” I reminded her of our timer and encouraged her to continue writing for the remaining seven minutes. After a thirty second (or so) pause, Michelle went right to work. Through her journaling, Michelle does not usually engage in the conversation aspect of this activity, but tends to stick to simply answering my questions. However, my most authentic writers, the two students that I have felt have had the greatest success with this activity, are Jessica and Karen, and they never seem to struggle with what to say next. Ten minutes into the writing time, I observed that Kevin had simply restated one of the questions I had asked him. Up to this point, I had redirected him five times to stay focused and work on his response. From this observation, I can infer three things: Kevin is not interested in our current conversation, he is uninterested in maintaining a dialogue journal with me, and/ or Kevin does not like to write.

When our fifteen minutes were up, I interviewed the students on their thoughts and opinions about our journaling activity. I first asked them, “What do you think about how we write to each other in the journals?” Jessica, Karen, and Michelle immediately responded, “It’s fun!” When asked why, Jessica responded, “I like how we are talking to each other without actually talking.” Karen thought it was fun because we were able to talk to each other freely. At this question, Kevin and Anthony say quietly and avoided eye contact with me. So I directed a question to Anthony. I asked, “Anthony, why do you think we write back and forth to each other? Why do I have you all do this?” His response was perfect, “To learn from each other and to get to know each other.” While discussing the students’ likes and dislikes for this activity, Kevin was pretty quiet; he didn’t seem to have much of an opinion on this activity. When I asked him if writing to me was hard, he replied, “Yes because you expect us to think and I don’t like to write.” I further explained how this activity was not chosen to be too demanding or require intense thinking, however, it provides us the opportunity to talk with each other, learn about each other, and share a special conversation we might not have otherwise. At this, Kevin nodded his head in agreement and the dialogue journal activity concluded. Based on my conversations with the other four students, this is a fun activity that they enjoy doing, and it strengthens our relationship.

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